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Love Hurts Badly

Post by |Joon-Baby| on February 25th 2010, 7:55 pm

NEW STORY! A TooBin FF. Well I hope tp get readers ^^
Title: Love Hurts Badly
Staring: Choi Seung Hyun//Kim Yoobin//Tae Yang//Kim Yoomi [fic]

Characters:

Kim Yoobin: The typical smart girls, works hard, knows whats right and wrong shy, not that outgoing, wears glasses, and is the oldest out of the twins.

Kim yoomi: The total opposite of Yoobin, she is outgoing, has fashion, everything is about her, and she loves the attention from guys.

Tae Yang: The cutest guy at school, he’s the sweet heart, and he gets a lot of attention from girl. He has been friends with Yoobin since forever but then he couldn’t recognize her until she tells him.

Choi Seung Hyun: He is one year older than all of them, he is a fun person who gives advice and loves to help others, but he is also a bit of a perv at times. But other than that, he’s hot!

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Plot:
Yoobin was a girl who lived with her grandma in the country side, when her twin sister Yoomi lived with her parents in the city. She didn’t have the fashion or the looks like her sister; instead she was the actual opposite of her sister. She wasn’t out going, didn’t have the good looks, no taste in fashion. Then when Yoobin goes and lives with her parents, she meets her childhood friend Tae Yang. She had always liked him, but then when Yoomi finds out, Yoomi decides to go after him too. Then she fights for Tae Yang, but she feels like she can’t have him, then she meets Seung Hyun and he gives her advice in love. Then her whole love perspective changes but will her heart change too?

Wait for chapter one to read.

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Chapter One

Yoobin and her sister Yoomi woke up and headed to school. Today at school they are having a festival. They both work at different classes. Yoobin got changed into a working outfit and came to help them serve food.

[Yoobin POV]

I was serving coffee for all the customers when I over heard people talking. She turned around and it was a group of guys and her younger twin Yoomi.

Guys: You have a twin?!

Yoomi: Yeah.

Then she turned around and looked at me.

Yoomi: Unnie! Come here.

I walked over to them and Yoomi introduced me to all the guys.

Yoobin: Hello.

Guy: Oh darn it. We thought she was like you. Double the hotness. But I guess not.

Yoobin: Hahaha. You know what they say, one twin always has the better looks and it’s her.

They all started laughing and then I walked back to my job.

Minni [friend]: Hey what was all that about?

Yoobin: Nothing, she just wanted to introduce me to her friends.

Minni: You’re so lucky to have such a pretty sister.

Yoobin: Okay.

Minni: Don’t you ever feel like everythings about her and never about you?

Yoobin: No, were sisters.

I know I was straight out lying but I didn’t want her to know how I feel.

Minni: If I was you, I’d be embarrassed to be around her.

Yoobin: What do you mean?

Minni: Like she’s so much prettier than you and has much more attention.

Yoobin: but that’s all nothing.

Minni: Well it’s just what I think.

Yoobin: Let’s get back to work.

*3 Hours Later*

The music was getting louder and then everyone started leaving the café and watching the concert outside.

Minni: Hey where did everyone go?

Yoobin: Outside to the concert.

Minni: What?! And no one invited us?

Yoobin: ...

Minni: Come on let’s go.

Yoobin: No its okay. I gotta clean up the place.

Minni: Are you sure?

Then at the moment Taeyang entered the room. I don’t think he remembers me much, but it’s okay.

Taeyang: Where did everyone go?

Minni: To the concert.

Taeyang: Are you guys going?

Minni: Yeah just about to.

Taeyang: Are you going Yoobin?

Yoobin: No it’s okay.

Taeyang: Are you sure?

Yoobin: Yeah.

Sucks a lot. Both Taeyang and Minni left and I started cleaning up the café. After I finished cleaning up the ppace, I went to watch the concert from the window.

*Bam!*

Then the door flung open and some guy in a marshmallow suit came running in and hid under the table.
Then some girls came running in.

Girls: Did you see some one run by here?

Yoobin: No.

Girls: Dang it.

The girls ran out of the room and then I bent down and looked under the table and there was the marshmallow.

Yoobin: You can come out now.

The marshmallow came out and sat down on the chair. The marshmallow took off the marshmallow head and looked at me.

Guy: I want some coffee.

Yoobin: We’re closed.

Guy: I want coffee.

Yoobin: I’m sorry but we’re closed.

Guy: I’m not leaving till you get me some coffee.

Yoobin: Fine.

I walked into the kitchen and made some coffee for him. I brought it out to him and set it on the table.

Yoobin: Here you go.

Guy: Thank you.

Yoobin: ...

I went back to cleaning.

Guy: How come you’re in here alone?

Yoobin: Cause I didn’t want to go with them.

Guy: Ohh.

Yoobin: Why were you running away from them?

Guy: Cause they want me.

Yoobin: Oh really.

Then the guy opened up my book that was on the table and saw the picture of me, with Taeyang in the background.

Guy: Who’s this?

Yoobin: My friend.

Guy: And you like him a lot?

Yoobin: No, it’s nothing.

Guy: If you like him don’t be shy, just let him know.

Yoobin: No.

Then I watched as he took out a marker and drew on the picuture. I ran over to grab it from hm but was a bit too slow and he already drew on it.

The picture now has a heart over the both of us and it read ‘My boyfriend”
I was shcocked.

Yooin: Why’d you do this?

Guy: Cause you should be able to do this.

Yoobin: What do you mean?

Guy: Okay repeat after me. ‘Me and Taeyang are a couple’

Yoobin: That’s nonsense

Guy: Just say it.

I said a once and then he told me to say it even louder and I did.

Then Taeyang walked into the café shop.

Taeyang: Oh we have a customer?

Guy: No don’t worry, I’m about to leave. And your Taeyang right?

Taeyang: Yeah why?

Guy: And you’re Yoobin’s childhood friend?

Taeyang then turned and looked at me a bit shocked.

Guy: Bye.

The guy walked out and left me and Taeyang there.

Taeyang: You’re Yoobin the one who lived with her grandma?

Yoobin: Yeah.

Taeyang: You’ve changed so much.

Yoobin: Oh.

Taeyang: Well I’m glad I met you again.

Me and Taeyang talked for a while then every one came back to work.

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I know my first chapter isn’t that good, but I promise it’ll get better. ^^ And yeah!


Chapter Two

[Yoobin POV]

Today I woke up and headed to school, I didn’t walk with Yoomi cause we never really do anything together. I got to school and met up with my friend Minni, she was eating a bag of chips like usual.


Then as class started, every settled down in their seats and he started the class lesson. We all paid close attention, our class is such nerds.
Then after the lesson, the teacher gave us class time to do the work he gave us.

Minni: Yoobin, do you have a bandaid?

Yoobin: Yeah.

I looked in my bag for my book with the picture in it, that’s where I usually keep my bandaids, but when I looked in my bag, I couldn’t find it. Then I remembered, maybe I left it in the locker. I got up and ran to the locker, once I got there, I opened up my locker and took everything out. But it wasn’t there. I started to freak out. I ran back to the class room, because I knew that if it wasn’t in the locker room, it would be in my bag.

Once I entered the door to the class, everyone turned arounbd and looked at me abd started laughing. I didn’t move, and then Minni came up to me.

Minni: Are you okay?

Yoobin: ...

I walked pass by Minni and went to my desk. When I got to my desk, I saw that my picture book was open. I immediately closed it. I looked around and everyone was still laughing.

Minni: Yoobin, why do you have a picture of Taeyang?

Yoobin: Do you know who opened it?

Minni: No.

I didn’t know what to say.

Linah: Don’t lie Minni, it was you who opened it.

I turned and looked at Minni; she was shaking her head and saying no.

Yoobin: Then where’d you get that band aid?

Minni: I... I

Yoobin: How can you do this to me?

I ran out of the class in tears and embarrassment, I couldn’t believe she would do such a thing to me. I thought we were friends. I ran to the top of the school and looked down.

Yoobin: Ahhh!

Guy: What are you doing?

I turned around and it was him.

Yoobin: Nothing.

Guy: If it’s nothing, then get down.

Yoobin: Noo.

Guy: If you don’t get down, I’ll make you get down.

He started to come closer and then I moved closer to the edge.

Guy: Don’t.

Then all of a sudden a wind came and knocked me over, I closed my eyes knowing that my life will be over. But when I opened my eyes, I was on top of someone and I felt where their hands were. It was one my boobs.

Yoobin: What are you doing to me?

Guy: It’s a 34A.

I got up and covered myself. And the guy got up too.

Guy: What’s wrong?

Yoobin: Nothing. But your stupid idea did not work.

Guy: What happened?

Yoobin: Everyone saw that stupid picture.

Guy: So you should be proud of it.

Yoobin: What do you mean?

Guy: Well if you like him let everyone know and not be afraid of it.

Yoobin: Do you mean that even if I like him and everyone knows, that will be okay?

Guy: Yeah, you shouldn’t be embarrassed at all.

Yoobin: Oh I see what you mean.

I walked back to class, but before I went in I took a deep breath and opened the door. Every one turned and looked at me. I walked to my seat and Minni came up to me.

Minni: Why are you so mad about it?

Yoobin: I’m not.

Minni: But –

Yoobin: I’m okay with everyone knowing about it.

Minni: So yo-

Yoobin: And I thought we were friends, I cant believe you would do it.

Miini: I did-

Linah: Minni don’t lie. You opened it up.

Minni: No I didn’t.

Linah: Don’t lie.

Yoobin: Don’t worry I’m not mad, but Minni I don’t really want to see you anymore.

Minni: What?

Minni walked away mad at me, but I didn’t really care.

Linah: Forget her. *pause* And you’re Yoobin right?

Yoobin: Yeah.

Me and Linah started talking and getting to know eachother. Today I learned that after this incident there will be people who are against me and people who support me.

But after class I went to see if Taeyang was there, and he was! I ran up to him and asked him something.

Yoobin: Taeyang, will you go with me afterschool tomorrow to see grandma?

Taeyang: Of course. I haven’t seen her in forever. ^^

Yoobin: Okay then, Bye.

I was so happy, finally some time with Taeyang tomorrow.

[End of Yoobin POV]

[No One POV]

The only thing that Yoobin didn’t know was that some one was watching her.

Person: Watch out Yoobin, you will see what happens.

That person went to go find Yoobin’s sister Yoomi and told her that tomorrow afterschool that Yoobin and Taeyang was going to meet up by her grandma’s hospital.

Yoomi: Are you sure?

Person: Yeah.

Yoomi: And who are you?

Person: I’m Minni. One of Yoobin’s friends.

Yoomi: Okay.

Yoomi walked away from her and went home.

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Okay that’s chapter Two ^^


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Post by oreoxlove on February 25th 2010, 8:07 pm

sounds good! i like how the sister is kinda the rival! update soon!
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Post by tofu on February 25th 2010, 8:09 pm

Yoomi sounds like me
update soon Smile

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Post by |Joon-Baby| on February 25th 2010, 8:11 pm

Yay! Two Comments.
Just not too long ago i was freaking out, but yay readers for me!
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Post by oreoxlove on February 25th 2010, 8:31 pm

just read first chapter. poor yoobin. i would be like her if i was treated that way. and btw, i think each chapter is supposed to be on a different reply and the first post would have a chapter index.. but this works too lol thanks for the update!
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Post by |Joon-Baby| on February 25th 2010, 8:46 pm

@oreoxlove:
How do you do that index thing then? Let Me know ^^
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Post by oreoxlove on February 25th 2010, 8:54 pm

oh well u can go to the How to get started section. so thats how i did it but its confusing
first, you paste ur chapter into a reply.
second, copy the link location of the reply (which the url of the reply)
third, go onto ur first post and push edit
fourth, write CHAPTER INDEX
fifth, press enter so ur typing below chapter index
sixth, press the chain button which is in between the colors button and the picture button.
seventh, copy and paste the reply link into the first blank. and then write Chapter One and/or title or w/e into the second blank.
eigth, save and ur done!

hope that wasn't too confusing!
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Post by |Joon-Baby| on February 25th 2010, 8:59 pm

ohh. sounds still confusing, so i'll just leave it the way it is. ^^
But thanks anyways :]
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Post by oreoxlove on February 25th 2010, 9:06 pm

no problem! sorry i couldnt explain well enough haha i think its super hard to explain something on the internet
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Post by oreoxlove on March 6th 2010, 2:31 pm

u need to update
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Post by JayWalker. on March 13th 2010, 9:48 pm

Anticipating on chapter 3 ! Smile
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